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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The highs are higher than I’d anticipated soporific till you fall from that distance then there is no measure there is no expectation now that my heart will not remember you always as we write this story take a chance love will be enough every dream I didn’t dare to indulge today’s crossword puzzle pass me the pen Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, But some dreams require indulging...good write friend.  Show you care to those you love...today. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
as we write this story take a chance love will be enough every dream I didn’t dare to indulge today’s crossword puzzle pass me the pen I like that Duncan! Yep! Take a chance. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
there is no expectation now that my heart will not remember you always as we write this story take a chance love will be enough ============================== pass you the pen? I'm gonna handcuff ya to one...so that you put up a poem a day  Love the "no regret" attitude of this D... every once in a while, we get lucky...and love will be "enough" I do so love the way you "distill" We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
So many chances are lost in life I’ll take this chance with you I’ll even write in ink this time Written in sky’s of blue Keep me in your love my dear I’ll keep you in my heart Hand in hand through life we’ll go Never torn apart Ahh, what a great Friday….love and poetry…yours.  Everything is possible in the game of life |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Duncan, indulge me, and let me say what fine poetry this is. It breathes with its own rhythm. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Don't know how many angels are on the head of a pin, But I can take a chance, I guess. A good write, and good read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Duncan!! More, pleeease?! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love does so many things, and your poetry lays them all out, one by one. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The highs are higher than I’d anticipated soporific till you fall from that distance then there is no measure ======================== Sooner or later the fall cause enough velocity to allow you to soar back up, so why not take that chance and start kissing the stars. Very prolific write and the way you structured your verses was outstanding. You tied it all down and made it look simple when we all know it isn't. Very much enjoyed. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very nicely said, good sir |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
till you fall from that distance then there is no measure Duncan, true heartfelt pain.....so real Duncan, asonly you can do it. ever deep...runs |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
so right, many chances lost in life, unfortunatally Who cant help ourself but passing them up Beacause of a few key elements. Fear,embarassment... annyhting that hold you back. Its sad that such things can keep us from TRYING no matter how rediculas something might seem. I really enjoyed this poem. The man of few words... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pass the pen back, please... and while you're at it, locate my muse, would you? She seems to be on haitus... |
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