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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-04 09:21 AM

Sparked the Night

Sweltering over you,
knowing the heart-feel is deadened
but when the SHE crosses my path
in falsity of smile,
I burn so badly
I can feel the blisters of anger
rise on the softness
of remembering.

A once calm heart,
anti-ed with depressant
allowed the dry eyed visions to blur
and for a moment these lips
began to speak, a voice
from the past, edging, warning,
intimidating, releasing,
wanting to not feel what was overtaking
the nicety of the evening air.

It sparked too soon,
words from eyes,
firing before ready,
my body wishing
to be elsewhere, anywhere,
instead of feeling
so alone
in the crowd of thousands.

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-04-2002 09:30 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-07-04 09:41 AM

Maureen,
The saying is all things come to those who wait. Enjoyed the write.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-07-04 10:36 AM

seems we had the same scenarios going on last night M. Well thought out and constructed. well done.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-07-05 01:02 AM

This should be read more, because there is definetely something here. I loved this.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

4 posted 2002-07-05 03:07 PM

There IS something here to be read...
a lot of lines between the lines...
{and thanks for the catch in mine, m'girl...}

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-07-05 03:18 PM

too many lines between the lines. . . perhaps they are better unread. . .

well done M. . .

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Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-07-05 09:21 PM

"I can feel the blisters of anger
rise on the softness
of remembering."

What a powerful line....as are the others.

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