Open Poetry #21 |
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Born Innocent, Born Free |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Born innocent Brought harshly in Brightness, strangeness Fear, crying, cold wet Lost Searching for comfort No words to express Raw instinctual fear Learning by the second alive Loved, wanted Cared for from the first breath the first touch first smile Now... Alone, afraid, angry Wanting to understand not knowing questioning Why??? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry This happens sometimes...in between birth love and somewhere...it is very sad..such a stark difference, your words brought it home. |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy firstly what on earth was this doing so far down the page, I have my pages set to 200 and this was well down that one. I know it’s not because it isn’t excellent writing, it must be because the pages move so fast and a lot had posted on top of you. I’d be ……….. I’d better not finish that thought darling heart, otherwise I’ll be requested to edit the reply This is indeed exquisite writing, I don’t think there’s another that consistently writes such fine pieces. And the range of styles darling heart you have clearly an amazing talent and it’s wonderful to see it displayed so beautifully and in this powerfully. Well done darling heart very very well done. Now I’ve finished telling you how wonderful this is, I hope you had a fabulous 4th July and it was really special. You know I love this utterly utterly it is purely divine ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A Pondering, thoughtful write... Poignant, hard hitting... heartbreaking... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Barry! Makes ya stop and think..I like that! Happy Forth of July my friend. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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