Open Poetry #21 |
![]() ![]() |
In Flight Through Dream |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
In flight through dream not often, never plenteous, is the interval between the extant prize freedom when tiredness comes from restlessness of soul when one's spirit, bound by commitment but when there is a span of moment the zealous soul can take flight, if there comes the dream Come, Dream come swift interval of inbetween, after uneasiness and lassitude lend expanse between erratic sleep and restless groan in Cimmerian imagination betwixt eyelid and penumbra of midnight now, attend, take Flight with me come take height with me as then in reverie to see ourselves from without and within you, in sheerest skin take care, not to burst the bubble it glimmers luminously vigilant not to burst the dream in radiance, blinding thus pathos steals over we in intent dark's dream of freedom our arms lie quiescent, serenely by our sides through thought of mind only, careful, please take care not to burst this dream might I, through thought raise we up, up, beyond the limb of the tree, breath held, up over roofs, careful not to touch tile, lest burst the bubble of elevation, up, careful, mental image up don't look, don't look but by my side, as you have traveled upward with me, we float over, and spy on all below, lights of the city bright, blinking, telling us ascend higher, higher we float, so soft, soar, so high flighting higher, sighting skies of firefly light lightening bright in thunderless night silken robes grace our form, soft we feel, in all we are warm then extend arms weave through this night's time of symphony of quiet, quiet, come what may in seamless dream no flight delayed, and tingle of skin in translucent silvery flight stretch your fingers, grasp my hand, tingle together in paired delight then slow, now, descent of flight, shhhh, stay quiet not to burst this dream to fall to earth in restlessness, tiredness as grows slight the light, on horizon's night, ending now dream of flight praise comes to you for attending to me as we skimmed toward freedom of night in flight through dream ~*~ 25 November 2000 revised 3 July 2002 |
||
© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved | |||
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea You dream where I want to go...just wow! |
||
Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Karilea, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love when your words are soooooo whimsical and carry us all off to dreamland! (sigh) This is a beautiful journey through the unconscious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I agree with Martie...you never cease to amaze, my dear friend... jwesley |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...AMAZING!!... |
||
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
what a most amazing poem ... great flow... and got the stamp of your great writing abilities, my friend, Karilea... Regards to you, sudhir |
||
GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
SNORE hehe this is very cool |
||
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love your dreamstate, Karilea... It was so lovely.............. and so relaxing... ![]() Lyra |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |