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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2002-07-03 04:22 PM

looking
d
o
w
n

sometimes you can
see
too
much

other times you
see
more
than
you
want

but, then again

up?
looking
than
better
it
is

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-07-03 04:40 PM

Oh Sven my friend! You should see my face!!
I get SO excited when you do something as creative as this!!
Personally I would rather look up!
There is just SO much more to see!
*Especially when you're only 5'3"*

Can you tell how much I love this??!!
Sure do!
~Big Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-07-03 04:52 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love how your words slide down the page like raindrops and elevate all the same in motion of thought! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-07-03 05:02 PM

such fun to read and I think I like up also but down can show humility - well a bit of a puzzle to read and evokes puzzling ponders - liked it - Paul

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-07-03 05:15 PM

Sven..Had to come back to tell you this. This just brought to mind a quote a favourite grade school teacher penned in my autograph book.
Yup...kept it all these years...goes something like this.

"Two men looking through prison bars,
One saw mud, the other saw stars."
~Author Unknown.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2002-07-03 05:18 PM

you always find something different to do with the most simple thoughts, Sven Pen. I loved this.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

6 posted 2002-07-03 05:46 PM

depends whats up and whats down but I know what you mean only u could think of this

I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

7 posted 2002-07-03 06:23 PM

I must agree with the others Sven,
your work is always so much fun to read when
you get creative like this ...

And to answer your question, depends on what we're looking up at ....

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2002-07-03 07:38 PM

Clever stuff Sven my friend.....Great imagination!

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

9 posted 2002-07-03 08:12 PM

OOHHH...whippin out the fancy pen on me here...*smiles*

you know...it probably depends on what I'm lookin for???

yes *devious*...I know

take care sweetie!!
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-07-04 12:46 PM

I have to say, I like this one. Glad you posted it. Nice write, Sven.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2002-07-04 12:25 PM

Wonderful indeed, Sir Sven...

regards,
sudhir

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-07-04 05:52 PM

Stirring the juices again,
aren't you...?

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2002-07-05 03:40 PM

hello all

you know me. . . I'm not one to present my thoughts in any kind of "ordinary" fashion. . . LOL. . .

thank you all. . . I'm glad to read your thoughts on this. . . and to tell you that it doesn't matter how you look at it. . . just so long as you look. . . have a great day everyone!!

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