So Much Can Be Said (Repost)

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Open Poetry #21

So Much Can Be Said (Repost)

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-07-03 10:16 AM

So much can be said
between the lines
between the spoken word
with a hush
with a lick of the chops
and a drop of the lower jaw....
Slurp, gobble gobble,
gulp
slurp, gobble gobble
gulp.. yumm....
gulp... burp.

Some people have the tenacity
to say so much with so little:
slurp..chomp..gobble gobble..
glup...burp. Ahhh!
Other people have so little to say:
burp!

The key is to let most of it go...
in one ear
and out the other
without devastating
your mind in between.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-03-2002 10:19 AM).]

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

1 posted 2002-07-04 03:14 AM

This is hilarious...and cute too!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-07-04 04:36 AM

Very very noisy but very very RIGHT!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-07-04 11:58 PM

I was in one of more playful moods, thanks cafe and ethome for sharing your thoughts

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2002-07-05 12:36 PM

interesting..I think it needs another round while I think about it.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-07-05 08:59 AM

appreciate your help

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