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Midsummer Night Fries |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Greasy spoon at the corner hot air welcomes midnight stroller tables with fork reliefs cooking staff beats the heat... fries sizzle in their vat hot plate is loyally scraped to the tune of Quebec country.. and artsy clients waggle in wonder where they've all been greasy spoon and sunflower forks adorn those table tops crowned each with a glass filled sugar shaker the fries sizzles a hamburger gets tossed on a griddle and out in front is a trio of fiddles.... fries still sizzle the hamburger turns its rightful cooked colour did I say this was the witching hour? for some artsy clients who'd prefer to eat at least there's room as the cooks beat the heat. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-03-2002 08:41 AM).] |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
What a delicious poem, very much enjoyed! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
why thanks mycafe, I must say there's a whole bunch bunch of new kids on the block with some very original names like yours..welcome to Passions...I like cafe's will be passing by  |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
okay..I admit..I may be overanalyzing, but there has to be more to this poem than food..but..All I can think of is how hungry it makes me for a quick burger and fries right now. *sigh* Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
bumping 'cause I like it..  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Who would think it A good poet can find poetry in anything. Joyce |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
of course there's more than fries here...like an atmosphere of relax despite the sweltering heat.Thanks for bumping this Temptress, Joyce and One Heart for sharing  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-05-2002 08:49 AM).] |
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