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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

0 posted 2002-07-03 05:32 AM

when night strums her breasts in slow eye adagio
and mistress moon is breath sound pizzicato
am I but monophone of wind in passion then

when we pant step fast the wicked allegros
like the parchment penned hymnals of loki
when we seam our percussion chorus bolero

and the hurdy gurdy man grinds his finger pens
as you in lute wield gown violate nights baritone
and spend tenor whims to croon a psalmist spin

are we duets of warble mouth staccato blend
chivvy crying to ululate our cain of raising bend
in concert struck varitate of curtain lifter's sin

or but fetch of song to eyes of watchless whim

©Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-03-2002 08:53 AM).]

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-07-03 05:41 AM

Ha! I love it! Good key too!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-07-03 09:53 AM

when night strums her breasts in slow eye adagio
and mistress moon is breath sound pizzicato
am I but monophone of wind in passion then

when we pant step fast the wicked allegros
like the parchment penned hymnals of loki
when we seam our percussion chorus bolero
============================
as you in lute wield gown violate nights baritone

are we duets of warble mouth staccato blend
chivvy crying to ululate our cain of raising bend
in concert struck varitate of curtain lifter's sin
==================================

You are just too cool for school..
youve penned a chorus of creshendo,
this is sooooo sinfully sensually wonderful
the vocab and subtle rhyme is poetically sublime.
very cool write DS..but then me thinks you couldnt write any other way

We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ... but the fall from the height.

E. McCain

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-07-03 09:59 AM

et, thanks friend for the review and wave.

janet marie humble buckets of huggy thanks...still dinkin with stuff (grin) goes with the smoke, thanks ms pleasure

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-07-03 10:26 AM

a symphony of images and feelings touchingly sensual - thanks for a great poem - Paul

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-07-03 10:29 AM

Dark Stranger
A whim is a whim and not a sin. Enjoyed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-07-03 10:47 AM

Sometimes silence speaks very loud...
I am being very silent...
Excellent write...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-07-03 11:10 AM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love the quirkiness of this write, sweet friend, I just love your use of powerful vocabulary and imagery, I do know many words but truly you teach me many too! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-07-03 11:58 AM

Dang!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2002-07-03 12:03 PM

Paul, thanks sir for the kind words, glad you enjoyed this.

sy, thanks amigo, was fun to play with music a bit

Sunshine, good morning ms coffee lady friend, thank you for stopping by to listen

noah, hi guy, glad there are words that are useful in my humble hangings

Enchantress, I love that word...dang is so cool thanks babe

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2002-07-03 12:19 PM

Andante~
rapidement je cours en votre musique du soleil.

While night is hanging moon sheets out to dry..

Me..

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2002-07-03 12:32 PM

Regina

soyez la lune pour moi alors
laissez-moi être votre chanson de ciel
( i promise not to sing )

thanks for the vison of song babe

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-03-2002 12:36 PM).]

Martie

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California

12 posted 2002-07-03 12:33 PM

DS

If you sing, I'll listen. You are an orchestra!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2002-07-03 12:40 PM

ms martie, you don't want me to sing

unless you like the sounds of a cat
caught in a door and finger nails on blackboards with reverb..thanks hon

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

14 posted 2002-07-03 11:23 PM

"When night strums her breasts in slow eye adagio"

Man, this is the coolest of cool...you express life like no other. I love your unique charisma.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

sigheyes
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since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

15 posted 2002-07-04 11:38 AM

Wonderful song you sing DS.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

16 posted 2002-07-05 05:29 AM

mel' thaks lady friend for your sweet touch

sigh's a pleasure to have your touch, thank you so much

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