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Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-07-03 04:02 AM

This poem I wrote after my brother came to visit me... again it was such a disappointment... after I wrote this poem I decided to let it go... sometimes we have to accept life as it is... without expectations...

His Heart...

Yesterday
he came to see me
after many years
of silence
but soon… very soon
I realized
we still speak
a different language…

Yes…
he came to see me
but…
he left his heart
at home...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-07-03 04:05 AM

Very sad but good writing!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-03 06:35 AM

Amazing, at times, how siblings
cannot connect...

a good write!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-07-03 06:39 AM

although very sad, this leaves one with a sense of reality. very well written hon. Hugs.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-07-03 07:00 AM

Nice expression of your feelings...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-03 12:25 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I am sorry your brother didn't communicate with you well and I hope soon he can forgive you! (sad sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

6 posted 2002-07-06 08:00 AM

My dear readers... thank you for your sweet words about my poem!

Love, Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

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