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Open Poetry #21

The Next Passer By

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-07-02 11:47 PM

Deadly is the moon, which serves
the vast storm rising in your heart,
Following the lives you cannot have
but wonder if the richness of such is paved.
Forgetfull is the last moment you can
have as a mangled thought presses,
Giving justification of how you
could be so cruel in your intent.
Laughter is my heart, as I walk
the silent wind away from your dagger,
Leaving a mark outlined in words
that are posted on the strings of prayers.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-07-03 12:15 PM

Okay, consider me impressed. I like this one a lot!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-07-03 11:55 PM

Beautiful flow here...and this is really deep. I enjoyed it.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2002-07-04 11:19 AM

I have missed your work amongst other things...

Love,
Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-07-04 11:22 AM

Michael
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2002-07-05 01:06 AM

giving this a bump because its an awesome piece of work.
Loved it!

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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