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Awaken To A Sigh
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Awaken To A Sigh |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A whisper of breeze stirring my lids awake as a touch traces upward. Softest of sigh falling upon my mind, waking... bringing a hunger to my lips The lightest graze upon lips from moist wine flowing over my tongue, over me. A whisper of breath blowing over my ears, asking me. As a woman's voice says... Awaken to your dream, as your dream conquers your lust... feeds your fires of desire, peaks the passions of man, as man peaks the passions of me... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) YES!!! Oh Barry, I can see the moral of these words, sweet friend, we must believe that love will find a way but until then find pleasure in the dreams we have and let them hold us off until the day it greets us! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy what was this doing so far down the page darling heart? Mmmmm? Wake up everyone this was far too far down the list. Truly one of your best darling heart I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous Is that the softly falling rain that covers my soul with your pure words scented with peace and delight? I think so I really think so. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling heart, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. Does writing get any better than this? Well, if it does, YOU will have written it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's quite the sigh....Nicely written Magnus! I was able to take the trip to the scene that's what is so much fun! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very very nice, Barry. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Much vigor here, in the sensual side of man. Well written. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't it warm enough outside? You have to make it warm in here, too?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang Barry! The sigh you cause to escape from me could have been heard by my neighours! This is, um...warm, and really really good! ~Hugs & Sighs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, If I could wake to this each morning, it would make me want to sleep everynight. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
big..huge sighs here, Sweet Man. I LOVE the way you wrote this.  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well, Barry, you sure awakened the sighs in me, I love this! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Wonderful to awaken to! Good writing. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This needs another round since its wonderful and I'm feeling this memory tonight. Love it of course.. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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