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two "waitings"
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two "waitings" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I her eyes hold all the miles from there to here waiting she finds a moment of peace while a gray sunset brightens the shadows she turns and sees me making note of this moment we share a smile and suddenly the miles don't seem like so many any more II reading she remembers something something that she forgot to write down intent on not forgetting she rummages for her notebook and I wonder is she writing about me as I write about her? -------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling here* I enjoyed these Sven... wonderful images were painted in my mind as I read. Love the presentation as well. Thanks for the tip on my post... just trying something different. I know what you mean. Stay cool... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
mmmmMMMMMMMMMMM !!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling.... |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Simply lovely, Sven Pen. I think this one has to have a space in my library.   I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Sven hi there, these are perfectly lovely no one writes these as well as you do it is an education simply reading the way you let the words trickle over the page I love it. Really excellent writing the form is ideal and the presentation cannot be faulted. Well written dear friend well written indeed. This is definitely a keeper   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can see a continuing story line in this Sven. Small stories, big stories, I love em! How many times has the poet ever rummaged for his/her notebook? I don't go anywhere without mine. wonderful Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A poem of a gentle love....excellent!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hello. . . and thanks to all. . . these are called "waitings" simply because they were written while I was somewhere waiting. . . I take these times to look around, and to notice the people around me. . . and, I caputre them here, in these words. . . sort of like a picture, but. . . something a little more. . . thanks again. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
sometimes I wonder the same thing... just in case you didn't notice, I had to unearth your work.  PS..I'd love to send you e-mail, but finding time to read your old work is so much more fun.  All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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