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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-07-02 11:57 AM

Here are her eyes

She waits to watch to look for you
Then smiles her pretty grin
She stands the length of tall she owns
Each inch, delightful sin

Demure she is in tailored slacks
Her blouse coquettish whim
But when you catch the look of her
Those eyes that make you Him

For every man would want those eyes
To drape the layers rare
And you beg for what’s behind
Those eyes for your compare

She has life to live beyond those eyes
You imagine the scene just so
You and her, those sultry eyes
Taken to places only two can go

Then she speaks, though eyes you right
And her words now let you know
That life may live behind those eyes
But to those places, you’ll never go

So you wait for her to watch for you
Then watch her smile her grin
As she stands the length of tall she owns
Each eyeful, delightful sin

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-07-02 12:13 PM

Decca darling girl this is utterly utterly perfect. I love it love it love it. It is soooooooooooooo incredible how you’ve captured that look within this. Utterly wonderful writing and so smooth, the rhyme is pure poetry in motion too.

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Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-07-02 12:44 PM

Demure she is in tailored slacks
Her blouse coquettish whim
But when you catch the look of her
Those eyes that make you Him
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*smiling at your smiling eyes*
very very Deca of you poetess ...
very cool write ... considering its smoldering

We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ... but the fall from the height.

E. McCain

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-07-02 12:49 PM

beware of a woman with fiery secrets in her eyes!

got me thinking, ya did...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-07-02 02:08 PM

ms deca, she sound lovely
and dangerous
sure glad I am safe here
in the pip place...

enjoyed it lady

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-07-02 02:14 PM

Deca girl you sizzle!!
Oh those eyes!
I can picture the smoldering look you gave him.
Wonderful read for a sultry summer afternoon.
~Hugs~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-07-02 04:14 PM

I may have seen these eyes a few times in my life Decaflame. . . thank you for reminding me. . .

great work. . .

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