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Open Poetry #21

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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-06-30 01:39 PM

As she passes through that door,
have she waved at me,
glancing back as if she missed me?
When she looks at me,
does she see a mirror,
with spacious white wall?
Or does she see the garden
of glass stone with flowers,
accompanying her memoriesss?
Would she want to have
a walk but time does not allow,
leaving a regret for life?
What would she do today,
just sitting on a chair
all by herself alone in her room?

//sometimes, memories is like a blank, and the feeling is uneasy

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

cherrypoptart
Member

since 2002-06-09

Posts 109
state of wordthiness

1 posted 2002-06-30 03:19 PM

Very interesting and good write.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-06-30 04:21 PM

Like this...James

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-07-01 12:58 PM

Made me think of The Yellow Wallpaper. Enjoyed...

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2002-07-02 02:38 PM

thanks all for responsing to this poem

how's summer everybody?

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

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