Open Poetry #21 |
Your Mouth |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Your mouth is but a flower these two lips long to kiss Your hands are but the hours I long to spend like this Your legs are trembling but for naught Your mouth, your hands-- I'm caught |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hey walt! Been a while since I've read you. Very interesting poem, you left me wanting more. enjoyed it my friend. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ohhh...getting mushy on me...you know I appreciate that Walter!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
walty. . . this is perfect. . . I love it. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You shouldn't be staring!!! LOL Enjoyed this. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wayoutwalt Clever, enjoyed the read. |
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