Open Poetry #21 |
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Blue and Black |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state ![]() |
the colour of a bruise.. no the way the day flows from the morning to night with angel guided flight beautiful light laughter in the daily orbit, I'll be after smiles never shout remember sky blue zenith black can't storm my play cause I know your love [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-01-2002 09:25 AM).] |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martin darling boy This is seriously excellent writing, the flow of this is perfect, the internal pace and the construction cannot be bettered. And the form perfect absolutely perfect. You write divinely Martin my dear friend absolutely perfect I love it ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very good poem - I enjoyed it - Paul |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Marsha I would have thought it could be extended but I'll keep it as is Paul, Thanks for sharing..amazing what colors can tell us. |
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