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devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-06-30 05:06 PM

I cast a spell
to cradle your soul
Redemption of failure
a sight to behold...

I use Mystery’s guide
an Eternal Deity
To become your need dust
so you blow in my breeze...

Clandestine mockery
I seethe in your soul
To feed your skin crave
Believe nothing more...

I shower your senses
and strum blatantly
Caressing decision
Watch you, watching me…

Unbreakable bonds
I bleed into your soul
Unthinkable odds
I love what I hold…

(fixed the font for ya'll...yeesh!!)

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

[This message has been edited by devina (07-01-2002 07:34 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-30 08:27 PM

Interesting write...would like to know the inspiration behind it...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-06-30 08:30 PM

Beautiful write...very interesting.
Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs~

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-06-30 09:08 PM

Very deep, Tanya. I like.
One thing I wouldn't like is to be an egg

Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

4 posted 2002-06-30 09:24 PM

This is truly amazing! Loved it.

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

formerlyKellie
Junior Member

since 2002-06-30

Posts 10

5 posted 2002-06-30 09:26 PM

I agree I'd like to know the inspiration

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-06-30 10:25 PM

Fantastic. Want to cast a spell for me?
Sandra

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-07-01 12:26 PM

I have no questions about th' inspiration. I have plenty of questions on what inspired y' to use such a hard-t'-read font.

Loved this, d/T.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

8 posted 2002-07-01 09:13 AM

You hold more than you know, Mistres D.

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

9 posted 2002-07-01 09:15 AM

so deep - so much to ponder - such a good poem - thanks - though it was a bit hard to read - maybe that is part of the effect huh? Loved it - paul

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

10 posted 2002-07-01 09:42 AM

Devina darling girl NOW this is utterly utterly outstanding writing. Sooooooo beautifully written, I love it. Truly outstanding writing. Interesting for all the right reasons constructed and presented excellently, I love it utterly.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

11 posted 2002-07-01 10:28 AM

Sunshine- inspiration comes to me at the weirdest times I say!! (In the car writing on my knees while I drive)this one was just that...with my beautiful man in mind, of course!!!

Enchantress- and I thank you for that sweet lady!!!

Kris-I knew you'd like the egg...smiles seem to be my forte this month... Thanks for the read hun...

mycafe-thank you for the "amazing"...I'm smilin now!!

formerlyKelley- ah..you too huh?...splained it to Sunshine up there...go and peek...

Sandra- depends on what you need sweet one...if I can't do it...I know someone who can!!

Mike- now what would this be if not for that twist..it's purdy..dammit..

Rob- and don't I know it sweet one...

Paul- part of the effect?? um..yah..that's it!!! (reminds herself NEVER to use the purdy font again.. ) thank you dear...

Marsha- and you are ever sweet in your comments lady...you neer fail to get me grinnin!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2002-07-01 04:38 PM

you have just come so far. . . and not just with your writing. . .

I know that this has always been inside you. . . just waiting to come out. . . keep going. . . I'm listening. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

BrandeeM
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since 2002-05-01

Posts 45

13 posted 2002-07-01 07:36 PM

I don't think I wonder on the inspiration so much as the how'dya do it T???

loved this!!!

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