Open Poetry #21 |
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Come With Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Come with Me Take my hand emote with me Vision and fields of greenery Walk where flowers choose to grow Sing to them in words rondeau. Lay upon the velvet stream Color the clouds in hues of dream Ghost them into fantasies gold Let your mind see it unfold. Be a rippling butterfly Spread you wings the wind and fly See the world from wonders blue Hear the heart and beat of you. Let the air caress your skin Osmose the lures of gods within Listen to life’s lullaby The spirits of the souls espy. It’s magic of the mind you seek The goal of rainbows end mystique |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Take my hand emote with me Vision and fields of greenery Walk where flowers choose to grow Sing to them in words rondeau. Lay upon the velvet stream Color the clouds in hues of dream ================================== Be a rippling butterfly Spread you wings the wind and fly See the world from wonders blue Hear the heart and beat of you. Let the air caress your skin Osmose the lures of gods within Listen to life's lullaby The spirits of the souls espy. It's magic of the mind you seek The goal of rainbows end mystique ================================= *sigh* ![]() YOU are the magic!!! with the touch of your pen...you just colored our world with rainbow confetti and turned us all in to butterflies!! How cool is that me Sy-babers...waaaay cool ![]() And how cool are these lines of word play and vocab!! Sing to them in words rondeau. Hear the heart and beat of you. Osmose the lures of gods within The spirits of the souls espy. only you could come up with rondeau Delightful write Stinkylove...your words of rhyme and imagery wrap around me and take me to the Eden of your mind. I brought the tea...meet me under the willow tree... we will "rondeau" for two ![]() *winkiewinkie* ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, My pleasure, I don't know why but I missed you. Must be the rainy weather. See you for tea, just you Randy and me. ![]() ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Reverse osmosis to you to my friend....I just did all those things and I thank you for the encouragement.... "Vision and fields of greenery" "Color the clouds in hues of dream" "Spread you wings the wind and fly" "Osmose the lures of gods within " "The goal of rainbows end mystique" Oh Sy's written some wonderful lines once again.... Through the eyes with all their sums Look out brain here they come. You're just a dang good poet old chap! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dearest Seymour~ this is purest harmony, flowing ever so softly and caressing my mind as I read..excellent imagery within and pure joy to read, well penned. ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy Oh how utterly utterly perfect I love I love it utterly utterly. The feelings of joy and delight are exquisitely written darling heart, absolutely exquisite. As always you breathe over my soul with misty delight and I’m transformed, I become a winged delight of rainbow hue floating in air that sprinkled with lights luminescence. Pure magic darling heart utterly utterly beautiful writing, you reach inside and the warmth radiates through my soul, thanks for the delightful glow. Good morning darling man. Have a fabulous day ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, the rhythm and flow of this piece is just excellent! Loved my morning read from you! Enjoy the day... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome, Kindness is always repaid, thank you. Tracie, Your comments are always a pleasure to read. Marsha, Your shower of flattery has swelled my head to sigh, Now I'll have to set it out to dry. ![]() Enchantress, Good morning sweet, I hope you had a good morning. ![]() [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (07-01-2002 01:33 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
delightful - full of wonderful streams of thought and images - captivating write - thanks Paul |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I go there with your words, and it is the most enchanting place to be, your mind. ![]() |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Sigh...what can I say more... I simply loved it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"The goal of rainbows end mystique" you know that part caught me, yes |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful visions Sy yes true romantics can fly Hope |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Okeydoke. *G* Whatcha mean you weren't talking to me? LOL This is beautiful, Seymour... an absolute delight to read, a seed for dreams. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, Thank you for the nice reply. Martie, Thank you dear. ![]() Neeraja, Glad you liked, thank you. Passing Shadows, I thank you my friend. HopeS, I know you can fly. Suthern, Plant some in your garden, you never know. ![]() |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour hi there now this poem from you is magical, it really is beautiful, this is a gift of delight and beauty. I’m so happy I got to see this today, it’s been one of those days and this has elevated my spirits thank you. You are such an excellent writer with such a wide range. Really good writing, and thank you for the poetic lift ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, My pleasure to brighten your day. ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Let the air caress your skin Osmose the lures of gods within Listen to life’s lullaby The spirits of the souls espy. It’s magic of the mind you seek The goal of rainbows end mystique" ![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! Oh Seymour, I just love this, sweet friend, may you always drift into your fantasies and find all the beautiful things your heart desires within! (big hugggssssss) This s gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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