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One Sighs Fits All
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One Sighs Fits All |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I am walking on a higher plane though level thoughts are on a slant. The air is fresh, my breathing calm, each step a first, but solid plant. I envy not, the others have nor wish to be a wannabe. I am but she, achieving more, I prove to no one, accept of me. I've read your words, some of inspire, loved a few just yesterday. But disagree, a phrase I viewed one sighs fits all, like old cliche'. For I believe I'm colored new, rearranged of special blend. And when I sigh, the breath that comes is not the sigh that others send. I bleed your colors, favorite dye and Kick around some words of hue. In Literary circles read, high steppin' I am, when in blue. I heave a sigh, and breeze it through hoping destination finds that you will come, enjoin my slant, yield forth a meeting of our minds. So when I read and pick up words and thoughts come forth, in want of share, it is my life, laid down before, my sighs fits one, of equal flair. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: YES! |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Fantastic write! Truly. I'll read this again for what it gives. *Peace. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, This is a very good write. Enjoyed |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is beautiful, and you're right.  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
This is a very nice composition! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ I just love it ! You are, as usual, right on the mark !! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey I'm for everyone being themselves. Everyone deserves self respect and inner confidence.....Let them eat cake when it's necessary......Yeah good write Maureen! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed reading this! sigh.... my sigh |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a very good write - I enjoyed it so much - thanks Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. This sighs is definitely your sighs... Exceptionally well written... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart this is utterly utterly splendiferous, I said I’d be along to reply and voila moi voici this is wonderful writing and yes darling girl you are you your rainbows are gaily coloured and you stride out in your own light, Magnificent declaration darling heart I love it.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
of course it's been awhile since I've been around to read you M, but this one was a good one to come back to. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Loved this from the title to the final line. Great write! Shenachie |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, It seems to me your sighs have changed since I first started reading you. And it is a good sighs too! I love your growth a lot.  Show you care to those you love...today. |
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