Cayman Waters (a duet with a passionate muse)

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Open Poetry #21

Cayman Waters (a duet with a passionate muse)

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-06-11 09:15 PM

Misty
as if to hide
when all along
you were by my side
tinting the sea
deep in contrast
swimming in pools
of shimmering
glass

Miss me
in sun soaked skies
through Cayman waters
and your crying eyes
like a lover's touch
in a passionate wind
that fills your sails
and journeys back
again

Mystery
with each daylight's fade
two unsuspecting hearts
share moonlight's shade
dancing across the dunes
against waves of golden glade
arms of paradise
where lovers are
made

** Thank You Muse **

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-06-11 09:18 PM

You did this duet very well. So very much
in tune...

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-06-11 09:59 PM

I like this!
Thank you to both
of you!
Aren't muses fun?

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-06-11 11:27 PM

Lovely!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-06-12 10:46 AM

soaked skies
through Cayman waters
and your crying eyes
like a lover's touch''

I love the reference here, crying eyes can be so gentle sometime....the emotions are clear....very lovely Craig~

hugsssss

Lauren~

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2002-06-12 02:00 PM

Oh this is so beautiful. I'm so happy you shared it with us.

Dawn

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-06-18 10:42 PM

YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I am so happy I found this, your gorgeous words always melt these pages and bring inspiration and have us all daydreaming of our own Muse and being on vacation on the Cayman islands and everywhere! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-06-18 10:43 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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