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Open Poetry #21

Softly Ends the Day

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-06-11 08:57 PM

Sunflowers
Reaching up to the sun’s light
It towers.
Taller than the rose,
Along the fence painted white,
Intertwined it grows.
Scent and shadow cast,
The heat diminishing with bright,
As breezes drift past
Sweet coolness for wings
As a dove interrupts flight,
Softly starts to sing.
Butterflies flutter
On a blossom gently light,
Then to another.
Song flies into wind,
Returns to nest for the night,
As day draws to end.

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (06-11-2002 09:01 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-11 09:10 PM

Smiling here....

LilTai
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

2 posted 2002-06-11 09:24 PM

I like this! Nicely done =)

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2002-06-12 07:02 AM

Thank you, Sunshine & LilTai,
For taking the time to read and respond.

Gloom

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2002-06-12 02:35 PM

beautiful.....
a moment of taking it all in...
BTW gotta love sunflowers : )

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2002-06-12 02:45 PM

Thank you,Zinsser
This was constucted all in my head
while sitting in a wood paneled courtroom.

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (06-12-2002 02:46 PM).]

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2002-06-12 02:50 PM

LOL I love it .... sounds like me... as usual I have been working like crazy and I had 2 meetings yesterday I had to go to and in the middle All I was wanting to do was write.... but I would have got caught and been in trouble (not that that would have been anything new ) ..... : )

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