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Cliché |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Cliché Cliché, your words mean nothing do they Hopeless my dreams lie In abandoned spray Thoughtless words tossed to me Told of a dream That won’t now be Cliché, so trite meaningless dross Left me crucified On lost heart’s cross Alone and desperate I hang here Pierced through My soul with liar’s spear Cliché, such lies you used to cover me So blinded by love That I couldn’t see I’d kept hope alive now its dead Done to death By all you said Cliché, I can’t believe I fell for you Naively I thought The cliché true Now I’m paying the price of faith While my spirit withers And becomes a wraith Cliché, I’ve given up and given in To suffer like this The price of sin Maybe one day there’ll be no pain But will that cliché Come around again Emma Eternity, stands laughing at old time for ages? In the grand ancestral line Of things eternal, mounting to divine [This message has been edited by andEmmamakes3 (06-29-2002 02:04 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Emma...how pleased I am to see you writing...just as I knew I would be!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Emma, is your Mum or Sis helping you with this... Young lady....I want you to know this poetry is very beautifully written...Nicely done! And they could not have possibly done this!! (Just Kidding Krissy and Mushy)!!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Emma, we are all delighted to read your powerful honest words, sweet friend, I know this feeling and I hope now you are surrounded by love and friendships that are everlastingly natural and inspirational! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Emma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Emma, Pierced through My soul with liar’s spear Wonderful lines. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Emma I sure like the way you present this......Gets the point across very well.....Nicely done! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Emma, you are getting so good at this and it is no cliche to say, Well begun is half done. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EmmaDear~ This is just stunning~ Your pen is filled with remarkable talent~ Keep it up gal ... love reading you~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
We may lose our faith in the human spirit for the disappointments we encounter, but faith in love can never be cliche or lost, keep believing in that even when the one you love lets you down and you can't go wrong... Powerfully done there Emma girl, you excelled your mum and sis with this one! ((hugs)) Dulci and Jeff |
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