Open Poetry #21 |
Sometimes The Tears, They Come |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sometimes the tears, they come and I truly don't know why even amidst a happy day its ruination they seem to try. Just some thoughts enter in my head about my Mother having not been here it seems her hand lays on my shoulder to calm my sorrow and wash away my tears. Fight with all my will, Oh God how I do try but I can't make them go away they cover the blue skies above and I'm held in sadness for the day. Sometimes the tears, they come no, I truly just don't know why I just wish that I could understand why some days it seems I'm meant to cry.... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-29-2002 09:29 AM).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Gentle Spirit...this is true of a lot of people including myself. Beautiful write alan |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
some days are just meant to be washed with tears and nothing can stop the flow. But how refreshed we can be in the aftermath. poignant poem Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This happens to me too, when I think about my brother. He died when he was only 26 years old. And, I don't know why, but for some reason, I have been thinking about him alot lately. I miss him so much. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If tears are meant to help us cleanse ourselves of our pain....then I should be free of pain in my life...for I have never been ashamed to cry... HUGS... |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
GS hi there this is beautifully written some days might be washed in tears but this is washed in beauty. Wonderful writing I love it Emma Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna, I know what you mean for I have those days too...when I think about my sister and what she's going through, and I miss her so much...see...now I need a dry shoulder...it's that easy, and I do understand. ~Hugs~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Yep, I know what ya mean. Fortunately, they don't happen too often. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, this made me cry reading this too because I too cry a lot because while I'm happier than ever, there is still so much I want that is so far from me, like my girl Joanna who I love so so much and I would feel heartbroken if I never got to see her! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Very good, Sometime the only way we can cope with being lonely or hurt are through our tears. The lines they leave on our faces are like roads to our heart. Bless You. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I often have days such as this, my friend. However, being a man, the tears don't flow as quickly, yet the hurt is still every bit as real. My mother and father are both gone and there's not a day goes by that I don't miss each one of them dearly. My best to you. BIG (((hugs))) Michael |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know the feeling. I get that way too. Very good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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