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| Open Poetry #21 |
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Seeds To Fruition |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Seeds To Fruition Each day awakens Page white and new Should I write for me Shall I write for you Do you read my lips Or imagine my face The emotional being Emerging this space Gypsy in the woods Dancing tree to tree Surrounds of ocean Mermaid of the sea At the early stages What shall be seen Am I young or old Or there inbetween The seed to fruition Takes time to grow Words upon pages Are like an embryo Breaking out a shell Imagining or reality Reading of thoughts Do you envisage me Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, You write so well like a white dove with a velvet glove. Good morning. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The seed to fruition Takes time to grow Words upon pages Are like an embryo =================== The title caught my eye and then I found it was tied to the above wonderful verse and smiled at the intuitiveness of this piece. Great writing from beginning to end. Much enjoyed. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Seymour for your sweet reply , this Aussie dove hope's to continue writing "heart verses of love " Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Mark , yes often there are words and verses scattered alike seeds that grow throughout the day , also from when I first began writing it as helped my confidence grow Hope |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hope, I can see why this is loved, it is so soft and gentle and rests like rose petals upon the heart. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hope, your words grow so softly upon these pages of blue. I love the way your writing has grown, you are a very special  Hugs to you sweetie. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Hope, we are all sooooo proud of you, sweet friend, your wonderful writing just continues to grow and your loving heart and skills prove it in your poems! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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