Open Poetry #21 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
If I don't hear a word you shall not see my tears for the years have trailed off letters lost in the meaning of friendship's worth. Implied and yet again denied sealing off my heart stamps of myself foretold in part to those that never cared to read I bid you well. My mission is not to illicit false advertisements or happy holidays or free vacations that never pay off. Nor do I expect a rebate, checked and unchecked returned to sender unclaimed. Redirecting correspondence crossed in the mail limiting the time where no ends meet upon arrival and yet you always do after I've ripped you apart reading over the riot act one more time~~ Only you know how to send me putting a rush on my thoughts priority packaged reaching me overnight~~ (sorry, just mopping up tonight, while waiting for the fed ex truck to arrive) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I like the line only you know how to put a rush on my thoughts Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Lori, I too find it a wonderful feeling to be devoted to someone you love that you just want to hurry home or at least make an express impression, sweet friend, this is a fabulous on-the-spot write, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Quite a mop up job....well done! It has my seal of approval every letter stamped with purpose. It totally enveloped me! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A nice write, enjoyed the read. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Priority write. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
bluezy, enjoyed the way to moving through this...well penned babe |
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