Open Poetry #21 |
I Can't Fight These Feelings |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
No longer can I fight these feelings I hold deep inside for you You're my very reason for living A great part of all I do I must give in to my passion And surrender to your charms How many nights I've envisaged Being held within your arms My dreams are filled with images Of a love that feels brand new I feel so much joy and rapture At the thought of loving you Now here you stand before me I see my dreams have all come true For together we'll greet the sunruse And I'll spend my days loving you My love for you is eternal And it comes as no surprise That I see a picture of perfection Standing right before my eyes My knight in shining armour Has swept this maiden off her feet The many ways you show you love me Still makes my heart skip a beat Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and let it keep right on skipping a beat. You are such a romantic woman... very nicely so.. |
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shoffswife Junior Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 38KY, US |
very nice poem...i was reading it and thinking of how i could relate to the feelings expressed by you. very nice and very romantic. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue, how loving and romantic is this poem...very much so. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I loved the pure feel of romance in this poem, Sue... ~ poetic hugs Lyra |
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Daylily Junior Member
since 2002-06-10
Posts 22USA |
Well done--bravo! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hooray! Skipety, skip |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup...that's the stuff I like. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...really like the title...fill this way myself about a relationship I'm in...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yep, sometimes it don't pay to fight it. Loved the poem Sue. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, your wonderful words always shine with such romance and I know your feelings will forever be filled with light! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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