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Love Game
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Love Game |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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The scent of your aftershave lingered As you walked out through the door All my senses were running wild For I knew what you had in store This night was made for romance So many candles filled the room Rose oil burned at the bedside A heavenly aroma that made me swoon I could hear the clinking of glasses And heard the pop from the champagne So very soon you would be joining me And we'd partake in our love game You finally returned to our love nest And discovered me lying on the bed There was no need for second guessing For my mind was so easily read The silky satin chemise I wore Barely covered the tops of my thighs Can you guess what happened next? Sorry, but it's definitely not for your eyes! Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Oh my, this is indeed sensual, sweet friend, this is very clever! (smiles) This is a delightful passionate love poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Loved this! Blushing, Shenachie |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This poem brings back happy memories.... Thanks.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw c'mon Sue! Just a little further,,,,,,you tease you! I'll only open one eye! Promise................Good scene once again Sue! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
That's teasing...but thats good...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sue, may your romance continue, you gave me a smile tonight, enjoyed the read. Sincerely Rick |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A very nice romantic poem, Sue. Enjoyed reading it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue, I see you are practicing the rhythm method and you know just when to stop. Stunning. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Su - Hot times!!! And you told me it was cold in Melbourne. We'll all just use our imaginations of what happened next. You are definitely feeling better!!!! :-) Hugs, Marti |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Great Sue, and you don't have to tell us who won the game.....I think maybe you were both winners!! Loved it hon. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-29-2002 09:38 AM).] |
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