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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Saying good-bye is like a child who avoids taking a bath putting off what must be done so you can get over it already. I wonder why it took me so long and why I kept fighting the battle little did I know I'd come out smelling like a rose. It's water under the bridge bubbles down the drain..... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Way cool...is that different than bathing alone?  Show you care to those you love...today. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's the same idea...Thanks Larry~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Many times, saying goodbye leads to the road of renewal  mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I hate it when the bubbles are gone.  Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*Giggling at Sandra* I love this Lori! ~Hugs~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BluesSerenade, is that the same as washing that man out of your hair? Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade Ant that the truth. Enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It is only hard in our minds...once we just go ahead and do it we see how we erred...splish splash I was taking a bath....James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sometimes it works out that way.....of course, if the child doesn't bathe....I doubt he'd be smelling like a rose...nice work dear....Next time....call me....We'll bathe together and forget about "good-byes" we'll just say...till tonight....okay?.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I guess it's human nature to put of the inevitable...forgetting how wonderful relief feels. Enjoyed this! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh what lovely imagery, Lori.... I think we all do that, though. Its hard to make changes in our lives, but I'm glad you came out smelling like a rose.  ~ good for you hugsLyra |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I know this may be morbid, but I was reminded of the roto-rooter commercial..."and flush your troubles, down the drain"...oh..my...I am getting warped! Very nicely done! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great analogy! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Lori, I know how hard it must be to say goodbye, sweet friend, I am so very happy now that has passed and now you are clean and happy! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks to each of you for reading~ Now if I can manage to get rid of the soap that is stinging my eyes...I'll be all set. it's always something!! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
You shine with optimism, very wonderful write. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well said! Let this be an anthem... Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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