Open Poetry #21 |
Down at the Arizona Bar and Grill |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
In the pitch dark and lonely bar the women come from near and far searching for love in such wrong place hoping to find a loving face. The shutters drawn around their eyes so very hard to hide the lies of vagrant dreams no longer real still they believe that love can heal. In darkest bar where hope still seeks no matter facts of life so bleak Eternal possibllities the only thing that they can see. Perhaps one day their truth will show with hoped for love they'll someday know. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (06-27-2002 01:06 PM).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This couldn't be more true. Love can heal, but sometimes the search for it can be devastating to say the least. Very nice write ... now get off the bar stool and go searching at the book store. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I think..in some place in our lives..every one has been in the AZ B & G. I know I have. Thank you..KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it would seem that this place never closes. . . excellent work. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad but filled with a spark of hope, sweet friend, I know of so many people like this but know that eternity holds a gate and soon you will be welcomed through it and you will be dining at candlelight all the time with your love in frot of you! (kiss on cheek) my thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, this reminded of that song.."Looking for love in all the wrong places..." Love it! *Hey!! Do I remember Love Story you asked? Did Ali McGraw and Ryan O'Neal makde the handsomest couple??!! Ah yes...I remember it well.* ~Hugs sweet lady~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I was there last night....hasn't changed a bit |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, Isn't that like looking for love in the wrong place? Excellent write. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The shutters have a way of concealing the light. I'm constantly adjusting mine, but I'm not about to close them up completely. I really like how you write Sandra~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sandra What a realistic picture you've described. So true and I like your kind poet's heart at the end! Is this Arizona Charlies where 'Asleep At The Wheel' play sometimes......smile!... Have a nice day! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Is this located right across the street from the Hotel California? James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sounds like a nice place, but I gotta agree with Mark.. the book store in the poetry section is a good start!! Enjoyed Sandra Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is actually a real place, in San Diego, but it was frequented more by old winos than women. Still, it had that smoky old dusty bar thing going, very atmospheric. I haven't been there for 7 ears though. LOL Sandra |
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