Open Poetry #21 |
four seasons |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Here I am in dance of field-- arms wide open spinning greed, I beg to find the sky of me... I beg to nullify my need. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That was short sweet and to the point. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
here i am to say hey! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I could well use that shot right now. And then some. Sky, need, spinning...can we make this multiple choice? Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Luscious... these lines spoke to me.... I beg to find the sky of me... I beg to nullify my need. straight to he point hon enjoyed. [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (06-10-2002 01:41 AM).] |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Serenity-- Your lines really spoke to me. Ain't it awful to be human and less than perfect? I beg to rise above! Shenachie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling...especially at that last..yes..mortality...REALLY SUCKS. (thus the principle of vampere?) Oh, just shut up and kiss me! *grin* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and dunc? smiling...of course... my window's open... altho my options? be limited. *sigh* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I beg to nullify my need. ============================= when ya learn how to do this? send vials...... *sigh* |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
I'll let you know If I agree with these sentiments by days end. LOL. Nice one. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sometimes you just amaze me! This is faulous ... and short; my favorite kind Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Just keep on dancin... Till the last dance is done.. Nicely said, serene one.. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Bravo! *chuckles* ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Here I am seasoned!! Nice call! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You said so much with so few words. This is lovely. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
do the eyes search or reach for what they have found clever slice ms Serene |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity An enticing open letter. Would I forty years younger. LOL Enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Came back to thank you all for your kindness...and sy? you are SO sweet-- gotta love this place! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Thought-provoking. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- I'm loving this one! Well said! I'm with JM...when you figure it out, do share. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well ah just had ta read this won again. Cause yore such a juicy sathern peach! You can be greedy on ma ranch anytime dharlin! Y'all don't be nullifyin nothin...ya heah! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like how you say nullify and not fulfill. Oh yes ah do. She said burn ... together. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
serenity, short but so cool! Love it! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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