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JuLiEt
Junior Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 44
Abbotsford,British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 1999-06-29 09:47 AM


Hey everyone who is reading this, I need a chorus for this song I'm writing, but can't think of a start...the song is called "Aphrodite"....

Shaken by feelings
Enclosing my heart
Teardrops of happiness
I never want to part
You make me so crazy
You are the only one who matters
Promise you'll never let go

....there i need more, I'll appreciate all suggestions!! Thanks!

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~*JuLiEt*~

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Augchic711
Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-06-29 12:59 PM


This response isn't as good as I would like it to be but I hope it at least lets the ball roll a little good luck with the song and let me know how it turns out!


Hold on to me
for eternity
promise you'll never let go

Stay with me forever
Love me with no regrets
and please don't ever leave me

You say that u love me
well why don't you show it
There is no need
for you to forget what we shared
just stay by my side
for all of time

*******Augchic711*******

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