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Temptress
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0 posted 2008-08-21 12:25 PM


Lets redo the word "blush"

Please post it in another forum besides this one.

I want to find new ways to say that someone is blushing, has blushed, etc. without being so obvious.  I dare you not to even USE the word "blush"!


"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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SEA
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1 posted 2008-08-21 09:08 AM


I will try it and see what I come up with! Did I mention I'm glad you're back?!
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2 posted 2008-08-21 04:31 PM


/pip/Forum106/HTML/000904.html

You'll let me know of my grade, yes?


Temptress
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3 posted 2008-08-21 05:33 PM


Well...two down, and the whole forum to go!

Sunshine, you have a reply.

SEA, thanks for the great welcome back.

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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4 posted 2008-08-21 05:50 PM


/pip/Forum106/HTML/000905.html


I am having to force them out sometimes, but I think I handled it. Let me know! }

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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5 posted 2008-08-21 05:50 PM


Yes, that makes 11,957 to go [as of today, this moment, 4:50 p.m. CST on 8-21-08.]


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6 posted 2008-08-22 01:47 AM


I am way too tired to attempt this tonight, but it has not escaped my notice or thoughts.

I'll be back so we can add one more to the list.

Alison

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7 posted 2008-08-22 05:33 AM


I woke up this morning and jotted it down ...

/pip/Forum106/HTML/000909.html

It was fun!

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2008-08-22 08:14 AM


Margherita WOW! I love this. You really found a way to say 'blush' without using it. Great job!

"They lopsidedly smiled
at each other then,
enjoying their mutual emotion
and they marveled
at an early sunset
intensely reflecting
on each other’s face ..."

Stunning!!!

ooxx  Marti

Life is a celebration of awakenings,
of new beginnings, and wonderful surprises that enlighten the soul.
    --Cielo

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