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Castello 93
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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, Write an affectionate poem for a pipe smoker Title it: “Castello 93” one of which is giving me great pleasure as I write. . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Castello 93 Hands gently touched his eyes Eagerly touched his neck And could not wait to press on his chest Kissing the trembling lips and held it open Ear closed to his mouth To feel his soft breath Took off his shirt, pants And all his others Skillfully laid him on bed Wrapped warmly and tightly by an angelic white Dreamingly he enjoyed his rest. This was the last scene The last two minutes Of a pipe smoker's life Before he died of cancer. Teeth were brown Lungs were black other pathological graffiti I am not able to write. [This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-07-2007 11:39 AM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Dear John, this topic is obviously for man. I wrote some was out of humour because I can't say good things about smoking. Still I do not want to annoy any one here who is a smoker. if you do not like it, do please let me know. it is the scene of emergency room rescue. have a very wonderful weekend. |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
I love a pipe smoker Except during poker. It starts my eyes blinking And gets folks to thinking “Maybe he’s tripled or holding an Ace,” But I’m not blowing smoke, it’s just smoke in my face. Jim |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Jim that poem is a hoot...thanks. |
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