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carolinabeen
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since 2006-12-12
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0 posted 2007-02-24 07:04 AM





sometime within the last
i kissed some chance
somewhere in within
i folded yet again
somehow she screamed my name
somehome he felt her gain
i burn her hollowed blame
somehow he feels again

J.L. Koehler


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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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1 posted 2007-02-25 03:35 AM


Not sure I get this one hon??
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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2 posted 2007-02-25 03:38 AM


What is she supposed to say?
How is she supposed to feel?
When her life world's still stuck to that fateful day?
How can she know if ANYTHING is real?

She's half the girl she was
And that half etheral not real
She tries not to think of much at all
And prays that one day soon she will feel ...

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