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Poetry Challenge!

My First Attempt

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-06-18 11:40 PM

OK Guys and Gals,
Let's see what happens with this one...
Instead of writing about a subject, or going with the first line, how about writing something based on the LAST line...

Here's my suggestion:
"And, listening to the wind, walked away"

Good Writing.

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-06-25 09:23 PM

I must decline,
for this challenge is to great,
I will listen,
but not partake,
A girl who calls herself wind,
is to troubled right now,
she will listen,
ask her anything and she will listen
and listening, the wind walked away

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-06-26 04:30 PM

Y'know, you've got to love Wind's sense of humor...

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-06-26 08:54 PM

heh

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (06-26-2003 09:58 PM).]

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