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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-10-06 02:31 PM


The impish squirl left THIS in a reply to one of my poems...and, hmmm...it intrigues me:

"I should buy a red-striped suit (lots of lines), so no one can ever cross me again without first signing forms in triplicate."

So...and ESPECIALLY YOU mike...(and LORI? I'd like to hear yours as well) but that's the deal. Use that in a free verse style poem.



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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-10-06 02:42 PM


Since when is 6' 10'' squirt?!?!

Awright, I'll try. But sheesh, didn't I already right the challenge (unknowingly)?

You're great, KA.

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2 posted 2002-10-06 02:43 PM


Um, that would be write, actually.
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-10-06 03:25 PM


um...Mike? not to be persnickety (That is Ali's job...waving to me "bro") but LOOK AGAIN...that was not SQUIRT--BUT? "squirl"

You being the one that started calling me Sen? I think I can get away with an abbreviated "squirl"---

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4 posted 2002-10-06 08:14 PM



LOL...so he's a large squirrley squirt...

may anyone join in?

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5 posted 2002-10-07 12:52 PM


Let's all dance! (poetically, I mean)

I'm gonna go post something now.

Miss Comprehension

(okay, that doesn't work um ...)

Mike Compre--oh forget it!

See ya in open!

Anvrill
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6 posted 2002-10-08 03:32 PM


Well, Lori's got a brain block. All this designing o' pages fr school and reviewing kiddy ghost stories fr appropriate age to read to children this Saturday...is just eating up my writing time. I'm tryin', but it ain't happenin'!

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2002-10-08 03:38 PM


Lori? the worst thing y'can do is TRY to write....let it be...it's prolly just a gestation thang...

*chuckle*

sometimes I tell myself I CAN'T, just to incite that lil rebel voice in m'head.

Oh my...I AM nuts.

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8 posted 2002-10-08 05:37 PM


that could be a problem then - considering your current association with a squirrel...
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9 posted 2002-10-08 05:39 PM


You're all associates in this squirrely-mad plan to take over ... um ...

the Poetry Challenge forum on piptalk.com?

Nuts.


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