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Poetry Challenge!
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Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31
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NM, USA
0 posted 2002-05-23 01:23 AM

These lines have in running through my mind and I can't think of a way to complete them . . .

In the midst of a deck of cards,
your Ace of Hearts is her,
while that disposable four is me.

The girl of your dreams,
I will never be,
because she sets the standards
as it seems.

Help me finish this, please . . .

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown
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