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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-12-24 11:48 PM


My pen is clogged. I don't think I could write a letter to the governor if I was on death row....arggghhh...blech...

Egads, somebody HEP ME...inspire me, or at least kick me in the shin and make me SWEAR colorfully!



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Daemonyin
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1 posted 2001-12-25 10:58 PM


I'm sorry ... I don't know how to ...HEP... someone...  Unless its ....HELP... you want...
well I can't do that either

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2 posted 2001-12-25 11:53 PM


Hep ya?  Hon'y chil, doncha think I'da hep'd m'se'f fi'st?  Wy i aint writ a thin'n weeks!

Kraw'

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (12-25-2001 11:55 PM).]

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3 posted 2001-12-27 10:00 PM


Go out do something you've never done beofre and something you've wanted to do.

Or do somthing you havent done in a long time that will evoke some memories that always inspires me.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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4 posted 2001-12-28 04:34 AM


I saw a lovely lovely lovely....umm, what was I saying?  

Anyways, I've been in California for the last week and a half.  You'd think it would be nice and such, but it's raining. I showed up for Cali's "winter".  I came to California and it's raining.  But I watched the elephant seals crawling across the sand.  And I heard the rocks receding with the surf.

And Saturday I'm going back to Kansas, where the temperature dropped 20 degrees in thirty minutes and such.  I certainly don't know what's going on in Kansas right now, but I know that I am going to have a party on New Years for sure.  Everyone is invited, though you'll have to figure out where.  

I don't know why you are uninspired, nor really how to help you.  Though, I think if I could get you alone for a few minutes, I am sure we could figure something out. *grins*  Something along the lines of a long talk in a small room, or maybe more like no talking in a smaller room? HEHEHE  

What did you do for Christmas?  My family exchanged gifts on Christmas Eve after Mass and stayed up late playing games.  After they went to sleep, I was up for a few extra hours of course, and then drifted off to sleep on the couch, laptop at my side.  Around four in the morning, I was wakened by a noise in the room.  I untangled the mouse cord from my arm, the phone cord from my leg, and stumbled over the laptop.  I raised my eyes from the carpeted floor and saw the last flecks of ash and soot drift slowly to the bottom of the fireplace.  The Christmas tree was sparkling with lights and ornaments and our stockings were again stuffed.  And on the rooftop I heard the hoofed clatter of eight reindeer and a sleigh.  

So what did you do for Christmas?  lol
Did you get any cool presents?  I was going to send you a card, but I couldn't find your address anywhere.  Do I even have it?  

Ah well.

I am looking forward to a little cold weather and some snow maybe.  Perhaps I'll get some.

Maybe you'll find some inspiration somewhere.  Let me know.

Love me

Allan Riverwood
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5 posted 2001-12-28 12:45 PM


Try some free association with yourself... that is, literally write down words as they pop into your head.  Then try sentences, phrases... see what awaits you.

Worked for me quite a few times.

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2001-12-28 12:59 PM


Thanks to all, and Philip--SWEETHEART--you know I love you, right? rofl...and I'm thrilled to hear from you, but if you check, in that row of doo-dads next to my pic...you will see options, one of which is a little envelope with my e mail addy....click on that my chatty friend!

Your holiday sounds like it was wonderful..and a party in Kansas? They do that there? and I'm invited but have to figure out where....hmmm...it's a wild guess, but, "Auntie Em's"????

Coincidentally, we are having a party after New Years, and everyone in the WORLD is invited...easy to find too, just come to New Orleans, a little get-together we call Mardi Gras!

Now here's my assignment--use that Cali rain (I know, the metaphor has been done to death, but...I know that you can find a different slant to it, and...WRITE ME A POME.)

As for the rest, a small room, well, we DO have an open love seat! yuk yuk yuk...

Love ya "dawlin'" (If you come to N'awlins you must practice that word--'dey all tawk like dat here!')

and WRITE!

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-12-28 01:02 PM


Allan...sorry, got side tracked by a normally sane guy who goes to California and see what happens? (scary ain't it?) grin...

and thank you for the good advice, think I will couple that with moon dust's and see what I come up with! Hugs and love, m'friend!

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8 posted 2001-12-30 03:50 AM


Try a Zack attack!  Now there has to be a poem in there somewhere?  I only have to look at the kids and presto ~ love, laughter, and yes sometimes anger too, but never silence   Hugs, and I would hep ya efin I cud but I am stuck myself at the moment and guess what, it is a nice holiday actually.
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