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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Fly Fly...on wings forged in winter ice Riding that memory train to nowhere Convince me...that pleasure lies on your lips |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
neat challenge, but nigh impossible to do in this venue. you can't see lips here...tom |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
he he! damned doubleclicks! [This message has been edited by PoemCrazy (edited 06-13-2001).] |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Two out of three isn't too bad  ."Fly Away" Little One taken too soon I stand over you on this, Your cold winter's morn You've left me now Although I want you back You are one of his And you're time has come You touched my hand So softly Just before you slipped Away. And I pray to God as I Stand here with tears Streaming down my cheeks That he will love you and Hold you, my child, just As he did once before. Fly away to him dear one Fly Fly on wings forged In winter's ice, Fly away to him and Find solace within his Arms. "Remember" I remember you... So well. The taste of your skin The way a single piece Of hair fell to your nose. The way you smiled At how goofy I acted. The way the summer sun Glittered off your eyes That day. When we ran along the beach Why did it ever have to end? And now you visit me so often Yet it never feels like enough You always end up leaving me Behind. Now I sit in your rocking chair Following the rhythm of your Heart Back and forth to the engine's Persistent chuggings I can almost see you Sitting across from me Riding the memory train to Nowhere. Thanks for the great inspiration. I'll be working on the last one. ~Susie ~*~Born to Blossom and Bloom to Perish~*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
These are fabulous |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'm really enjoying these! These poems are beautiful... inspiring. Nicely done, you guys! You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning... |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Last one is done  .You say your great Just one of a kind Brought here by fate Best thing I'd find You say you'll care Always think of me Leave, you won't dare Love was your decree You knew I was hurt Over and over again Treated as if I were dirt By so very many men I had enough of chat Your lovey-dovey trips Convince me that Pleasure lies on your lips I definetly don't like this one as much as the other two, just wanted to prove to myself I could do it . Thanks again for the great inspiration.~Susie  ~*~Born to Blossom and Bloom to Perish~*~ |
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