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Dee
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0 posted 2001-02-23 01:28 AM


I was thinking about the colour of roses, the sky before a storm. There are so many different ways of describing colours.
What's your favourite colour? Maybe you could tell me in a little (or big) verse.

Dee

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1 posted 2001-02-23 04:25 PM


Purple Senryu

Drop of blue hue of,
Red a little bit of orange,
Sky just before dawn.


~Maria~


Dee
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2 posted 2001-02-23 10:33 PM


Nicely done Maria. I love purple.
Dee


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Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2001-02-27 04:37 AM


Brown as chocolate
Green as changing as the sea
Melted together

Kethry
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4 posted 2001-02-28 07:29 AM


In leaf it is seen
my colour green
with hint and hue
yellow and blue

in emerald tones
as moss on bones
with grassy glade
a touch of Jade

for all the time
a sip of lime
and war games party
I vote for Kahki

In evergreen
I will be seen

Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.




[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 02-28-2001).]

Dee
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5 posted 2001-03-01 05:57 AM


Thanks Paula and Keth. Loved them.
Dee


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