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Poetry Challenge!

Acrostic Wedding Poem

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2000-09-25 11:35 AM

Little did I know, that the winds of change would blow,
Once more across the path of my life.
Until, I met her,
In the garden of my destiny,my beautiful rose,
She is the flower of my youth.

Could I have known, that
Love would come again, with
Eyes tender, and lips that whisper
Vows from a heart, beating next to mine?
Every moment of my life has led to this day,
Yesterday behind me, my life begins anew.

[This message has been edited by Debbie (edited 09-25-2000).]

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

1 posted 2000-09-25 07:17 PM

How wonderful! Beautiful way to meet the challenge!

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

2 posted 2000-09-25 10:01 PM

Thanks Angelwings,
I don't know if this is the sort of poem intended for this challenge but I thought it would be fun to try it as an acrostic!

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-09-27 08:51 PM

*sigh* Debbie this is beautiful!

Thanks so much for the help and meeting the challenge. I will pass this along to Louis and Clevey.
And I will let you all know if any of your poems were chosen.
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

4 posted 2000-09-27 09:42 PM

Thanks Isis, I bet at the very least, they will have fun reading them all!
Debbie

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-09-29 08:01 AM

Debbie~
This is just lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

6 posted 2000-09-29 12:56 PM

Thanks Marge,
I always appreciate your comments!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2000-09-30 05:42 PM

Debbie,
this is so well done. It deserves to win. Congratulations.
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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