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Isis
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0 posted 2000-09-24 03:49 AM


And now for something completely different.

I need help!  A dear friend of mine is marrying October 21st, 2000 and at this late stage has asked me to help co-ordinated the ceremony and wedding poetry.  I've already submitted a few poems but they are so fussy!!
This is where you come in!!  I'm asking and challenging all you wonderful passion poets to write wedding poems.  His name is Louis her name is Clevey.  It is second marriage for them both.  They are both over 60.  Want nothing too flowery and  very DIGNIFIED.  Also poem must be no longer than 12 lines (3 verses).  
I can't satisfy them, perhaps you can.  Please post all challenge responses here in THIS forum.  And I'll even let you know who gets chosen!!!
I need help guys so please put pen to paper.
I'll follow with one of my unsuccessful attempts..
Thanks.  Time is of the essence.
Isis


*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-24 11:27 AM



Louis and Clevey
October 21, 2000

As the music plays once more
take my hand and let us be
joined through eternity
on love's dance floor

Two become as one
this dance has just begun
Through life the music plays
I will love you all my days

This waltz through life we take
will fill our hearts with love
Louis and Clevey join as one
blessed from the Heaven's above



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-09-24 07:09 PM


I read your seperate thread, again thanks Marge (hugs)
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



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