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Reply to Brian's Poem

monique
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since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-09-23 11:28 PM

WoW! wOw! WoW!
Brian i happened to be listening to Walter Trout
And like magic you are saying the things
That rings a bell in my mind
So intrailed in his ELECTRIC GUITAR man
What a blow to the brain
To really bathe in his talent
From heavenly God
Who created the blues
To make me happy to suffer
So I can hear it
In melody of broken chains
Falling to the ground
On my knees I beg for more notes
On his heavenly strings
Rocking me on his rocking chair
Fais-dodo my baby I love you
To play like he does
Is divine
Can you hear it
He travels my soul
Into oblivion that everything is ok
We're all going to make it one day
Maybe my doubt won't believe it
But His Guitar is mighty good
O God You are so good for giving talent
To some and not to me
I am jealous sometime that
I can't do anything right
But just listening and shutting up
I should just do that before
I put my ttwwoo ffeett in my mouth
And cccchhhhooookkkkeeee to death
Au revoir mes amis it was nice meeting you

But I can dance and fill up the space with music in trance

monique

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