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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
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0 posted 2000-04-07 05:51 PM


Rise up it’s ugly head, all who see it will retreat
It’s s ferrous like strikes leaves
us  all in it’s wake a total defeat.

Serpentine coils surround unbound emotions
taking advantage sliding upon heart felt lotions.

Demons beware and devils take care,
she is the mother’s bane of all you hold dear
look her in the eye, show her you don’t cry if you dare.

It’s gaping jaws this serpentine beast, that lays within us all
opens wide you can’t hide your fears from it’s grinding maw.

It slithers through creating holes bringing forth our hidden woe’s
She doesn’t care there is no snare to halt her taking of friend or foe.

Just pat her head and ask her to rest, this serpentine demon of ours
this is all we can ask, if at our best, within our tear stained showers.< !signature-->

 

[This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 04-07-2000).]

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-04-07 09:15 PM


Wonderful work Joel!  Glad to see you are making your way around the forums so quickly too!!  It's always so interesting to see where different challenges take different people!! Well done  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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