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songwater Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32Marietta,Ga. |
Stuck inside these four walls A thosand years or more Wont somebody come and rescue me? It has been so long now I'm wondering what for Won't somebody take these chains from me. You can never tell,how deep,s the pits of hell, Don't try to run and hide,the pain is deep inside. Some will win,some will loose,but all of us will die Demons come and Demons go,but a Hero only tries. Win or loose,tie or draw.rainy skys or blue, To call on God to win the war, The hero inside is You.... ? |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very well said songwater  nice poemMystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Songwater!! And what a beautiful nickname you've chosen. Sounds mystical to me!! This was lovely, well written, and I too love the saying , 'A Hero is a man who tries!' There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Well put Songwater, For so long I looked for a hero to save me when all the time it was me. Great work. Joel. |
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