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TriXter
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since 2002-03-20
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The One

0 posted 2002-04-26 08:38 PM



Enough, this shattering pain
these sinful tears, the cracked heart.
takin' this suffering for too long,
all these tears down my face but i feel nothing,
it must be my heart cry.

She blackend my heart, she stole it as well
her heart full of greed, as she took all i was.
my love, never came close, so that is still mine,
but now for "the one" i still wait in line.
still noone for me, as others pair off,
I feel my heart cry.

now i see you, and my hopes arise,
u smile, and so do we all, you are contagious,
but you smile at everyone the same way, and I am no different,
you walk out of sight, and ill see you everyday.
and everyday, ill feel my heart cry.

The man of few words...

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-04-26 08:41 PM


but you smile at everyone the same way, and I am no different,
you walk out of sight, and ill see you everyday.
and everyday, ill feel my heart cry.


this weeps with emotion.  I am no different...darn this is powerful in content...I enjoyed this.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-26 09:47 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now you have found the one to forever comfort your heart! (sigh) My thought sare with you, sweet friend, this is sad but beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

DawnG
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3 posted 2002-05-17 01:54 PM


I hope your heart is no longer crying.

                               Dawn

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-05-17 01:59 PM


As Calvin (of Calvin and Hobbes fame) once said:

Oucheewawa!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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