Open Poetry #20 |
Whispers of My Heart |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Whispers of My Heart My heart whispers your sweet name late at night Your beautiful face enraptures me with divine light The very warmth of your smile brightens up my day My soul is entwined with yours, forever it will stay From the moment I saw you, I knew you were the one for me Like a key fits a lock, you match my soul completely Each time we are together my spirit takes flight and flies Without you though, my heart becomes shattered and I break down and cry Setting me free from the chains that have held me in my past Finally you came along, giving me understanding and a true love to last I'm blessed for everything you give me, for all the love you show Without you I wouldn't be anything, and it's just time that you know There are times, when I miss you so much, I feel I could die Then I think of your sweet face, and once again my spirit does fly You are the answer to my prayers, my soulmate for all time I'm speechless beyond words to be able to call you mine I love you J! "you can't stop |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster One very lucky guy, wonderful write. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart OH YES!! This is exceptional writing, utterly utterly brilliant. You have truly outdone yourself this time. Every single word in this is utterly perfect, threaded into place like the sparkling jewels that adorn the hair of a Goddess. Each and every stroke of your pen proclaims love out loud Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
keep whispering my friend. . . they're the words that are remembered. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I like this, and I agree with Sven's comment about whispering....Keep whispering....don't stop! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know he will alays be blessed by your love just as I hope he forever makes you feel happy! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, it's a wonderful feeling to be enraptured...isn't it? And think, we could feel that way about just about everything if we'd just let ourselves...but then, when love has captured our souls...we feel that way about most things without even trying...huh? jwesley |
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