Open Poetry #20 |
To Journal that One Moment |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To Journal that One Moment Never had cause to write before, not in my head nor in a journal... not really, until you. Oh, I may have had many false starts in my recent past, but the flowing comes when I think of you, your glances, half smiles, lips that touch feelings, overwhelming. Words, flowing into poetry, daily (many unseen) hundreds a month, thousands by now, rhyming, formed ramblings of my life. A book of sonnets, I am perusing, Of Love and Friendship. I am impassioned by their titles, each having for me, a phrase or two of intent. The "Now!" of it on page 3,merging my thoughts "You around me for once, you beneath me, above me-- Me--sure that despite of time future, time past,-- This tick of our life-time's one moment, you love me!" I write for me, and for my moments of you, in this Dream Journal of pages, shaded in blue. And on a leather bookmark, moon shaped embossed, words to save, my time capsule waiting for that one moment when... Once in a Blue Moon, a small part of my within, rests assured, that No one can lay a hand on my dreams. M * Now! by Robert Browning "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-25-2002 01:49 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Once in a Blue Moon, a small part of my within, rests assured, that No one can lay a hand on my dreams.... AMEN Maureen.....absolutely excellent.... Like a red brick, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks D, those words were embossed on a bookmark I bought this weekend..*s.. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-25-2002 03:14 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very nice Maureen ..loved the pic and bookmark too..enjoyed hon..hugs ~Victoria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. This flows with the smoothness of crystal streams of living light. It is flowing over my soul in a torrent of wonder. Beautiful writing darling heart utterly utterly beautiful. You really do paint with magic you know You do know I absolutely love this don’t you? Of course you do. As always darling girl this is utterly utterly perfect Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was, in all its many facits, superbly written, Maureen. Much applause to you. jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A lovely beautiful write. That I really enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Stunningly beautiful and sincerly appreciated~ 'I write for me, and for my moments of you, in this Dream Journal of pages, shaded in blue.' Ahhhhhhh ... the passion of poets~ So breathes each of us~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Donna, thank you *s it's nice to see you writing and doing it so well. Victoria, the journal and bookmark stood out to me calling "take me...I'm yours" *w I couldn't resist temptation. hugss M Marsha, thank you for such lovely responses. You are truly a dear, and I appreciate you greatly. As always M jwesley, why thank you, that was so nice to say and I appreciate the kindness. M Sy, some days i think I get my feelings write( oops I meant right!) *s thank you M Marge~ you are sweet my friend, thank you for your supportive words always many hugss M |
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