Open Poetry #20 |
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To Journal that One Moment |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
To Journal that One Moment ![]() Never had cause to write before, not in my head nor in a journal... not really, until you. Oh, I may have had many false starts in my recent past, but the flowing comes when I think of you, your glances, half smiles, lips that touch feelings, overwhelming. Words, flowing into poetry, daily (many unseen) hundreds a month, thousands by now, rhyming, formed ramblings of my life. A book of sonnets, I am perusing, Of Love and Friendship. I am impassioned by their titles, each having for me, a phrase or two of intent. The "Now!" of it on page 3,merging my thoughts "You around me for once, you beneath me, above me-- Me--sure that despite of time future, time past,-- This tick of our life-time's one moment, you love me!" I write for me, and for my moments of you, in this Dream Journal of pages, shaded in blue. And on a leather bookmark, moon shaped embossed, words to save, my time capsule waiting for that one moment when... Once in a Blue Moon, a small part of my within, rests assured, that No one can lay a hand on my dreams. M * Now! by Robert Browning "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-25-2002 01:49 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Once in a Blue Moon, a small part of my within, rests assured, that No one can lay a hand on my dreams.... AMEN Maureen.....absolutely excellent.... Like a red brick, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks D, those words were embossed on a bookmark I bought this weekend..*s.. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-25-2002 03:14 PM).] |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very nice Maureen ..loved the pic and bookmark too..enjoyed hon..hugs ~Victoria |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. This flows with the smoothness of crystal streams of living light. It is flowing over my soul in a torrent of wonder. Beautiful writing darling heart utterly utterly beautiful. You really do paint with magic you know You do know I absolutely love this don’t you? Of course you do. As always darling girl this is utterly utterly perfect ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was, in all its many facits, superbly written, Maureen. Much applause to you. jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A lovely beautiful write. That I really enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Stunningly beautiful and sincerly appreciated~ 'I write for me, and for my moments of you, in this Dream Journal of pages, shaded in blue.' Ahhhhhhh ... the passion of poets~ So breathes each of us~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Donna, thank you *s it's nice to see you writing and doing it so well. Victoria, the journal and bookmark stood out to me calling "take me...I'm yours" *w I couldn't resist temptation. hugss M Marsha, thank you for such lovely responses. You are truly a dear, and I appreciate you greatly. As always M jwesley, why thank you, that was so nice to say and I appreciate the kindness. M Sy, some days i think I get my feelings write( oops I meant right!) *s thank you M Marge~ you are sweet my friend, thank you for your supportive words always many hugss M |
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