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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-04-25 12:36 PM



To Journal that One Moment

Never had cause to write before,
not in my head nor in a journal...
not really, until you.
Oh, I may have had many false starts
in my recent past, but the flowing comes
when I think of you, your glances,
half smiles, lips that touch feelings,
overwhelming.

Words, flowing into poetry, daily
(many unseen) hundreds a month,
thousands by now, rhyming, formed
ramblings of my life.

A book of sonnets, I am perusing,
Of Love and Friendship.
I am impassioned by their titles,
each having for me,
a phrase or two of intent.

The "Now!" of it on page 3,merging my thoughts
"You around me for once, you beneath me, above me--
Me--sure that despite of time future, time past,--
This tick of our life-time's one moment, you love me!"

I write for me, and for my moments of you,
in this Dream Journal of pages, shaded in blue.

And on a leather bookmark, moon shaped embossed,
words to save, my time capsule waiting
for that one moment when...

Once in a Blue Moon, a small part
of my within, rests assured, that
No one can lay a hand on my dreams.


M
* Now! by Robert Browning


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-25-2002 01:49 PM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-04-25 12:48 PM


Once in a Blue Moon, a small part
of my within, rests assured, that
No one can lay a hand on my dreams....

AMEN Maureen.....absolutely excellent....


Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-04-25 12:53 PM


Thanks D, those words were embossed on a bookmark I bought this weekend..*s..

M

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Victoria
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3 posted 2002-04-25 05:42 PM


Very nice Maureen ..loved the pic and bookmark too..enjoyed hon..hugs

             ~Victoria

Marsha
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4 posted 2002-04-25 06:20 PM


Maureen darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. This flows with the smoothness of crystal streams of living light. It is flowing over my soul in a torrent of wonder. Beautiful writing darling heart utterly utterly beautiful. You really do paint with magic you know

You do know I absolutely love this don’t you? Of course you do. As always darling girl this is utterly utterly perfect


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


jwesley
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5 posted 2002-04-25 07:26 PM


This was, in all its many facits, superbly written, Maureen.  Much applause to you.

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-04-25 07:34 PM


Maureen,
A lovely beautiful write. That I really enjoyed.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-04-26 02:23 AM


Wynter~

Stunningly beautiful and sincerly appreciated~

'I write for me, and for my moments of you,
in this Dream Journal of pages, shaded in blue.'


Ahhhhhhh ... the passion of poets~
So breathes each of us~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2002-04-26 06:47 AM


Donna, thank you *s  it's nice to see you writing and doing it so well.


Victoria, the  journal and  bookmark stood out to me calling "take me...I'm yours"  *w
I couldn't resist temptation.
hugss
M

Marsha, thank you for such lovely responses. You are truly a dear, and I appreciate you greatly.

As always
M
jwesley, why thank you, that was so nice to say and I appreciate the kindness.
M


Sy, some days i think I get my feelings write( oops I meant right!) *s
thank you
M

Marge~ you are sweet my friend, thank you for your supportive words always
many hugss
M


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