Open Poetry #20 |
Each Of |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Each time we come together a little more I learn of you, the swing of moods, the change of looks, each time your play of mixture brews. I think you are my cup of tea, no sugar needed to touch these lips. Each winful smile is quite enough your mixture, mine, in blended sips. Each time it's you that offers me, invites appeal, in dark abode calls my bid submits to me to haunt my dreams in worded code. How far away, yet closer still I feel it more the mix of sweet. You stir in me more than a breeze my drink of choice each night's retreat. Someday I hope the "each of" comes our feelings mixed our memories, one. Ambrosia, each, we shall dessert, from first to last 'til coursings done. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is beautiful! My favorite part: Each time it's you that offers me, invites appeal, in dark abode calls my bid submits to me to haunt my dreams in worded code. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
You stir me with words so sweet that they will mix with the meaning of hoping you get the blend right that suits you so. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Ooohhhhh...I love how you closed the thoughts in this poem, sweet friend, there is a sweetness that fills these words of hope! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Midnitesun..thank you, I think those were my favorite lines *s D.Lester Young, I will get the blending I deserve one day...thank you for the visit and words *s M Noah, such a wonderful supportive poet you are.. thanks and many hugss M |
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