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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-04-09 07:33 AM

sometimes we are a mountains place
you are little skin woman
I am a cave for you to hide in

you fit your woman there
under my chest and arms
and let my warm surround you

you make soft noises
in your throat
you are a kitten sounds

I am a bear that has no claws
and you lay on my chest
and draw pictures in my fur

I am trees with low branches
you climb me to find places
that you can put your secrets

you are stream and pool place
your mouth water quenches me
you make dew damp on my beard

with smile eye tears..

©Dark

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-04-09 08:35 AM

lovin this~

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-04-09 08:56 AM

What's not to like in the simple action of sincerity....this...this is good!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-04-09 09:59 AM

DS

There is much giving in this poem...tender and love filled.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-04-09 10:01 AM

...Beautiful...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2002-04-09 10:27 AM

Lauren
thank you babe for your eyes

Sunshine, thank you for your morning touch here

Martie, so pleased that you enjoyed the tender parts thank you

Enchantress, slow hands smiling to you..thanks

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-04-09 11:42 AM

Beautiful, the style is unmistakable, and the smooth, sensuous feel of this is wonderful.
Sandra

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2002-04-09 11:56 AM

ms sandra, thank you for your walk up and look in...I appreciate you

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-04-09 01:37 PM

(smiles) I just love the passion you put into your words, sweet friend, your use of personification with the mountains amazes me with the love you have to give in your heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, the mountains win again! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2002-04-09 02:05 PM

Noah, thank you my friend, a pleasure to
have your reviews

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2002-04-09 03:45 PM

good grief, this is so sensual, well, everything you write is

and yes, I like the giving here too, very nice, to say the least

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

11 posted 2002-04-09 03:51 PM

"you make soft noises
in your throat
you are a kitten sounds"

Soft and gentle...it warms my heart. Hear me purring?
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

12 posted 2002-04-09 04:27 PM

mountain shadow comfort
echoes
depths unknown
hard edges
worn soft
from water's caress

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2002-04-09 04:44 PM

SEA, well welcome to the giving ..take some and wear it...pleased that you enjoyed.

Smittykitty, thank you for your eyes and purrs

Indigo..you take me to your side of the mountain...and let me drink of the sprit stream you guard...thank you

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